Want to know how I'll remember to put eye darts in my narrative? Startled Dartled. Thankyou Jess.
Here's my first attempt at eye darts.
In my narrative all I need is for her to be looking to her right while someone is talking to her, then she blinks and avoids eye contact with the other person in the scene by looking down to her left.
Anyway, here we go~!
Yes. It moves in opposing directions. The distance the dart covers is quite large, so experiment with a half closed blink built into it. It's fast. And there is no anticipation or overlapping action. That eye dart works.
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